Search from various English teachers...
70b9e6
That's hard. Only during this last year I understood how much is important for me social life (and I want you to know that I'm such a shy and introverted person). So probably without my actual close friends my life would be really boring.
Another thing may can be good health. You know, If you don't have any physical complication or problem you can do literally whatever you want. Nothing can stop you, except yourself.
The last (but not least) thing is the sea. I don't know how to explain this point but I'm in so love with the sun, spending days by the seashore, listening to waves's sound without thinking. Those days are the best.
---
Maybe if you can help me to find different ways to re-write these sentences it could be a great help, thanks!
May 7, 2021 12:06 PM
Corrections · 4
1
Only during this last year -did I understand- how -important social life is for me- (and I want you to know that I'm such a shy and introverted person). So probably without my actual close friends, my life would be really boring.
--You can also say, "So it's quite possible that, without my close friends, my life would be really boring." Yours works. It's just a little cumbersome.
Another thing -is maybe- good health. You know, If you don't have any physical complications- or problems,- you can do literally whatever you want. Nothing can stop you, except yourself.
The last (but not least) thing is the sea. I don't know how to explain this point but I'm - so in love- with the sun, spending days by the seashore, listening to the -sound of the waves- without thinking. Those days are the best.
--You can also say "Last but not least is the sea." It flows a little better.
Nice job!
May 7, 2021
That's hard. Only during this last year I've understood how much important is social life for me (and I want you to know that I'm such a shy and introverted person).
So, probably without my close friends my life would be really boring. Another aspect may be to be in good health. You know, If you don't have any physical complication or problem you can do literally whatever you want. Nothing
can stop you, except yourself. The last (but not least) thing is the sea. I
don't know how to explain this, but I love so so much the sun, spending
days by the seashore, listening to waves' sound without thinking. Those days
are the best. --- Maybe if you can help me to find different ways to re-write
these sentences it could be a great help, thanks!
May 7, 2021
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
70b9e6
Language Skills
English, Italian
Learning Language
English
Articles You May Also Like

New Year: A Time for New Beginnings
1 likes · 0 Comments

How To Learn Two Languages At The Same Time
0 likes · 0 Comments

How to Give and Receive Constructive Feedback: Strategies for Success in the Workplace
2 likes · 4 Comments
More articles
