I wake up early in the morning i have 3 beautiful kids i wake my eldest to attend his online school classes..my 2other kids are too young to go to school,usually they both wake up after about an hour.

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I wake up early in the morning i have 3 beautiful kids i wake my eldest to attend his online school classes..my 2other kids are too young to go to school,usually they both wake up after about an hour. I prepare breakfast and their milk, I drink my coffee to give me the enrgery to start my day we enjoy playing doing activities going to playgrounds and ofcourse teaching them and doing homework takes part of the time too. This is on general my day

2021年5月18日 23:42

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I wake up early in the morning, I have 3 beautiful kids, I wake my eldest to attend his online school classes..my 2other kids are too young to go to school. Usually they both wake up after about an hour. I prepare their breakfast and milk, I drink coffee to give me energy to start my day. We enjoy playing and doing activities like going to playgrounds and of course teaching them. Doing homework takes part of the time too. This is my general day.

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2021年5月18日

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