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Day 145/365 Hi guys! Today was a wonderful day. I haven't had something like this long time ago... I was so calm today. In the morning, I cooked a sweet dessert. It was so tasty😋 After breakfast, my husband and watched a movie. It was very crazy movie, I'm not sure that all people can say that it's a good movie, however we had a smile and (a)laugh sometimes. Next we drove in our motorcycle 🛵 around our city. I love it so much. There's a lot of reconstructing , because the president of China is going to visit this city in this summer. We walked in the new walking area, then in " The Old city". There was ( I mean in the old city) a markt with different pats. I'm crazy about of dogs. There were so many cute dogs.... I'm dream about it.... We ate humburgers in McDonald's and then I went to my private class. Now I'm waiting my husband, he's preparing piano sheets for the future concert. We're going to walk a little bit in our park because the weather is really perfect today.
24 maj 2021 11:31
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Day 145/365 Hi guys! Today was a wonderful day. I haven't had something like this for a long time. I was so relaxed today. In the morning, I cooked a sweet dessert. It was so tasty😋 After breakfast, my husband and I watched a movie. It was a very crazy movie, I'm not sure that everyone would say that it's a good movie, however we had a smile and (a)laugh sometimes. Next we drove our motorcycle 🛵 around our city. I love it so much. There's a lot of reconstructing , because the President of China is going to visit this summer. We walked in the new walking area, then in " The Old City". There was ( I mean in the old city) a market with different stalls. I'm crazy about dogs. There were so many cute dogs, I dream about them. We ate hamburgers at McDonald's and then I went to my private class. Now I'm waiting for my husband, he's preparing piano sheets for a future concert. We're going to walk a little bit in our park because the weather is really perfect today.
24 maja 2021
Day 145/365 Hi guys! Today was a wonderful day. I haven't had a day like this in a long long time... It was just so calm today. In the morning, I cooked a sweet dessert. It was so tasty😋 After breakfast, my husband and I watched a movie. It was very crazy movie, I'm not sure you could call it a good movie, however we had a smile and a laugh nonetheless. Next, we rode our motorcycle 🛵 around our city. I love our city so much. There's a lot of reconstruction at the moment because the president of China is going to visit this city in the summer. Then, we walked around the new walking area and in " The Old city". In the old city there was a market with many different pets. I'm crazy about dogs! There were so many cute dogs.... I'm going to dream about it.... We ate humburgers in McDonald's and then I went to my private class. Now I'm waiting my husband, he's preparing piano sheets for the future concert. We're going to walk a little bit in our park because the weather is really perfect today.
I left the word 'crazy' that you used to describe the movie, because I'm not sure what kind of crazy you are talking about. Was the movie weird or ridiculous or over-the-top? We probably wouldn't simply use the word 'crazy' in this situation because its not specific enough. Also, I didn't know if I should correct the last sentence "I'm going to dream about it." or "I'm dreaming about it right now". The correction would depend on whether you will dream in the future or in the present.
24 maja 2021
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