Keren 👍🥰

Thats a more effective sentenses because you repeated the word "saya" in a sentense.Try avoiding to repeated word in a single sentense because it sounds wierd. Also you dont need to say sarapan, just makanan(food) because you already say"Pagi ini" which means this morning and you cant order lunch in the morning so its already obvious that you are ordering food for your breakfast so dont need to say sarapan. For "kue dengan stroberi" well its not completly wrong but its better to say"kue stroberi" because its the same meaning,shorter, and easier to understand. The word "minum" is also unnecessary in that sentense because its also obvious that you will drink the coffee not eat it.also makes the sentense shorter 👌 Afterall indonesian can absolutely undertand your sentenses, a little practice will make it better and easier to understand.Great start for beginner still👊👊👊